Your writing is good, but aren't there too many vampire stories out there already? Yeah, I know you're probably not too happy to see this comment. But hey, you're not a real writer unless you hear your share of doubters' voices, right?
well, good luck with that! eew! haha.
glad you are still writing, even if you aren't posting. wish i could say the same. have some ideas for a few short essays, so to speak, but nothing on paper yet.
i'm sort of sad that things between you and dean didn't work out. This is really good, and it makes me sad that you lived this way. But glad that you are around to tell the story...
so, i get the feeling that this doesn't have a happy ending for you and dean. i am really hoping, since this is based on your real life, that this is not the case. but my gut instinct is telling me otherwise!
you're right though, it really is flowing. i couldn't scroll fast enough! haha.
so that short thing you posted was for real?! interesting! and even more intriguing! glad that things have turned around for ya hun! coming from my family, nothing makes me happier really!
i write mostly YA fiction, but would love to dabble in adult work, just cannot seem to get out of the YA groove. haha.
good luck with your vamp story...i think i read all of the posted chapters and just need to read amelia's thing.
As far as I am concerned.... I can completely relate to you on the subject. Though I won't say there was anyone there for me like there was for you, I will say that I had my experiences and decided life was well-worth living and drugs were too much to keep up with. I didn't want that consuming my life, and so I gave it up. I want to read more. I'm enthralled so far!
The thing is, if he refuses to talk to me because of something my ex said... then no, there cannot be any forgiving, as at one time he was the one who pointed out said ex was a liar, in more ways then one, and helped me deal with my exs cheating and lies. However... now... the timing was all just too strange. Both him and his gf have now blocked and removed me... I dont understand... *sighs* Im lost beyond words.
Thank you. This has just been so... strange. I dont know how to explain it without going into a whole long back story, lol, but I cant help to feel somehow this has to do with a ex of mine.... and I just wish I would have been given a chance to explain things, or at least a warning of some kind...
I'm glad you like it. I will warn though, i get horrible writers block. I started this story in May & just today managed to write all 3 parts of chapter 3
wow, didn't see THAT one coming! lol. of all the possible things, i don't think my mind came up with that one. haha.
but this is good...because doesn't the one vampire with amelia like witches? i was thinking that the vamps were gonna get damian or something. goodness, now i wish you didn't have writers block! lol.
i'll come back for APOV later! this is really good!!
so, we have two vegetarian vampires living with three non-veggies.
you really bring this to life! it's like reading a twisted version of "twilight" which i LOVED, so i am super curious about how damian fits into all of this. lol.
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I wish you luck I guess you arn't the only one who's busy with stuff.
I am new here, so havent read any of your stuff yet, but looking forward to starting! get to writing! =)
thank you. hopefully i get some time on friday to write.
Oh I am already a True Blood addict! Mmmm Eric... 
All I have to say is wow!!!
The thing is, if he refuses to talk to me because of something my ex said... then no, there cannot be any forgiving, as at one time he was the one who pointed out said ex was a liar, in more ways then one, and helped me deal with my exs cheating and lies. However... now... the timing was all just too strange. Both him and his gf have now blocked and removed me... I dont understand... *sighs* Im lost beyond words.