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You asked Baby
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16 Sep 2010, 06:15
*Kate*
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Baby you ask how much i love you
do you understand
the world not as we see it
or the way we make it
you can feel the wind blow your hair back
and bring a smile to your face that glows
can you count the stars above
or wish they stared back
do you ever stare at the clouds on a clear blue day
makin out pictures that make you luagh
i could never count all the ways
I just know I love you baby

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16 Sep 2010, 06:43
Opie's Old Lady
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This is a very nice poem . i like how you use the things we can feel and see but are unable to touch or full understand to help show that your love can't be explained. I've always been one to think that if you can pin point one reason then it's not real, but that's just my opinion.

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16 Sep 2010, 19:39
*Kate*
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thank you i love to write what i write is all from me and it always means something to me
thanks again ill post more on here soon can add me to your freinds if you like
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16 Sep 2010, 06:43
Opie's Old Lady
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lets try that again LOL

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