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Beyond Belief
by A RedSox Fan

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A broken heart’s mirror *poem

05/17/2009

A broken heart’s mirror
5-17-09
Jonathan

That night it rained
I went to get over this pain
Who’s to blame?

A broken heart
Smashed into 1000 parts
I know I just have to leave it there but it taste so tart

Everyone goes through it, I know
I will get over this but I’m still feeling low
I just need some direction on where to go

Last night my brother took me to a club to feel happy
I paid for things that should be free
Putting my hand in my pocket for another slimmy

I found the door of lust
It was a fucking tease, hands off was a must
So now what?

The more and more I dwell
the deeper I fall into the well

I don't want to be alone
I want a woman who I can hold as my own
But for now, I'm going to head home

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wow. that was so beautiful. I can feel the pain you must of felt when you wrote this. I really hit home. thank you for sharing

[I.M.Written.Shaded|0 likes] [|reply]

Sigh. Beautiful poem.

[Kate.Monster|0 likes] [|reply]

Beautiful poem!

[»Scarlett's Mommy«|0 likes] [|reply]

Beautiful but filled with so much sorrow xx

[Orchid|0 likes] [|reply]

Can really feel your emotion in that one. What a shame things turned out the way they did with you and Nikki
xx

[Brown Eyed BrunetteStar|0 likes] [|reply]

RYC: yeah. most of my poetry is depressing.

Been writing since 6th grade.. and i'm 26 now.
the ones i actualy like about 100

[I.M.Written.Shaded|0 likes] [|reply]

(hugs) i'm trying. still hard

[I.M.Written.Shaded|0 likes] [|reply]

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