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The Adventures of JoeAndrew and Velmis

08/06/2015

Hey guys, I've decided that I want to do something that I can be proud of in my life, so I have decided to become a play writer. Here is my first story. It is very good and I know it will soon be published.

Characters: JoeAndrew: A giant, orange, curious rabbit in need of cure
Velmis: A giddy, multicolored guinea pig ready to take on the world
Eunice: A questionable young frog
Setting: Small, forested town with only a Dave n Buster's
Conflict: JoeAndrew and Velmis cannot find someone to give them their medicine.

Scene 1:

Velmis: Good morning, JoeAndrew!

JoeAndrew: Good morning, Velmis.

Velmis: How did you sleep?

JoeAndrew: Not very well, Velmis. You see, we ran out of medicine last night.

Velmis: Oh no, I'm so sorry! I must have taken the last dose. I didn't even realize.

JoeAndrew: You knew darn well that was the last dose. Don't play stupid with me.

Velmis: You're right, but let's focus on finding more because fighting doesn't solve anything.

JoeAndrew: You're right. Get some shoes on and let's go.

Velmis: I do not wear shoes. I am only a small guinea pig.

JoeAndrew: You're so stuck in the past. I'm a rabbit and I do not let society define me. I will wear what I please, including overalls. *Aggressively puts on overalls*

Velmis: Now that you're ready, it is time to go.

Scene 2:
Setting: Forest

JoeAndrew: I give up! We should not have to search the entire forest to find every ingredient that we need! I wish there was someone to sell us our medicine! They sell everyone else any medicine that they ask for!

Velmis: JoeAndrew, please calm down. I may have caught wind about someone who could help us out. He is generally found at Dave n Busters. However, I have heard that he is not an easy frog to negotiate with.

JoeAndrew: We should at least try.

Scene 3:
Setting: Dave n Busters


Eunice: The name's Eunice. How may I be of service?

Velmis: Well, you see, we ran out of medicine last night and we are in desperate need of more. We will pay any price.

Eunice: I have your medicine.

JoeAndrew: Enough to last us through the winter?

Eunice: Yes.

JoeAndrew: Wow, that is quite a lot of medicine.

Eunice: I know.

*Audience claps*

Thank you all for reading! Any input would be great! Like I said, I am not a professional yet, so I would love to hear all of your thoughts and suggestions. <4

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oh my god, this is great keep going I love it already (:

[psychedelic_mess|0 likes] [|reply]

I'm curious why Eunice is 'questionable'. Does she have tattoos and piercings?

[EstellaStar|0 likes] [|reply]

Wow! Pretty koool!

[Baluba!|0 likes] [|reply]

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