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A Rose Isn't a Rose Without It's Thorns
by †ara

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My Poor Attempt at the Horror Genre Part I

10/05/2011



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12in12-2011 & Writers Workshop[Private]





We are the Malevolence Enmity[Working Title]

 

 

 

 

Children playing at the playground with their friends playing an innocent game, where two lines of children facing each other with linked hands and they call each other one my one and they run fast as they can in-between them to break apart the hands and they are free but if they don’t break the linked hands they are captured and become part of their chain. They play this silly game until there is one left and that one Child is captured. The Children chant,

 

 

Red rover, Red rover please send Sandra over…  Sandra runs as fast as she can she runs between Jessica and Josh she jumps hard into their linked hands by her hip and the hands stand no chance and Sandra runs free back in line.

 

 

Red rover, Red rover please send Nick over… Nick runs over to Rob and Even he jumps stomach down and is captured.

 

 

The  Children’s innocent laughter echo thorough out the play grown as they call each other.

 

 

One,

 

 

By,

 

 

One.

 

 

 

 

1.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Moira Young the most popular girl in school the queen bee and she thinks she the most beautiful girl in the whole school. Moira gets the good grades and is the student president.  She thinks she has it all. She thinks she is better than everyone else. Moira gets away with everything and her rich daddy makes things go away. But everyone thinks she is perfect with her perfect size two which she thinks is hot.  No one believes she starts the rumors, no one believes she starts the taunts and abuse.  She acts well in public and pretends she cares  and shows the public eye she is against bulling.  What everyone does not know is she’s the one that made Camelia commit suicide.  She and others Drove Camelia Smith to suicide.  Moira thinks she got away with it. She thinks she is free.   Little Miss Moira Young got another thing coming to her.  Little miss perfect will show her true colors when we are done with her.

 

 

Moria stood in the hallway looking forward to graduation and thinking about many more useless people she’d meet and who she could fool and who she can taunt.  She enjoyed them crying and crawling into themselves and some go back to where they came from.  She fed off of it and no one was the wiser!  Only her victims knew and she made sure they wouldn’t tell.  None of them did.  They moved, committed Suicide, or died from a freak accident.  Her eyes fell on Jennifer her new toy, puppet.  Moira waited until Jen felt eyes on her and she turned and found Moria looking at her.  Watching her walk pass her with a smile that sent shivers down her spin and she just stood there staring back at Moria burning wholes though her.

 

 

Our little Princess loves facebook she has a trillions of friends and she checks like ever few minutes.  She also updates before every class.   â€śMr. Osteen math class such a bore!”  Or “Mrs. Black, English teacher is such a freak!”  It was when she left the last message she felt her phone vibrate in the middle of Mrs. Blacks colorful lectures.

 

 

>YOU’RE THE FREAK! WE KNOW THE TRUTH! <

 

 

>You are a fake<

 

 

>Fake<

 

 

>Fake<

 

 

>Fake<

 

 

>Fake<

 

 

>Fake<

 

 

>Fake<

 

 

>Fake<

 

 

>Fake<

 

 

>Fake<

 

 

>Freak<

 

 

>Freak<

 

 

>Freak<

 

 

>Freak<

 

 

>Freak<

 

 

>Freak<

 

 

>FREAK<

 

 

>YOU WILL PAY BITCH!!<

 

 

> BITCH!!<

 

 

“Do I have to repeat the question?” asked Mrs. Black who know was annoyed with Moria not answer her. 

 

 

In her sweet voice as possible, “I’m sorry Mrs. Black.”  Then she frowned and a fake tear came down her face, “Someone is leaving me horrible messages.  On my phone”

 

 

Mrs. Black  took the phone when Moria handed her, her phone.  Mrs. Black face turned red. “ Is this some kind of joke young lady.”

 

 

“What? No.”  Maria’s eyes were wide with confusion.

 

 

“Go to Principle Wickeder’s office. I will not tolerate this in my class.  I’ll tell Princaple Wickeder what you think of me and Mr. Osteen’s class.”  She pointed her finger at Moria and pointed to the door. “ The nevers of these kids today have no respect for their teachers.  Huh, freak?”  Mrs. Black ranted and before  Moria got to the door. “Principle Wickeder will have your phone.”

 

 

Moria argued with Wickeder and she insisted that horrible messages were on her phone.  She pulled the water works which didn’t work and it definitely didn’t work when he saw the evidence and didn’t see any bulling messages on her phone. She grabbed her phone from Wickeder.  She scrolled with her finger and found nothing. She thought that she wasn’t crazy.

 

 

“I swear Mr. Wickeder that those messages were there!”

 

 

“Stop playing Miss. Young and you will apologize to Mrs. Black.”

 

 

Moria tightened her lips ,  “Fine.”  She thought that she had damage control to do after all she  has an image to keep.

 

 

A week later Moria patched things with Mrs. Black and she thought she would give Jennifer false hope. She invited her to go shopping and offered to help her buy a whole new wardrobe.  While Jen was in the dressing room Moria thought she heard chanting someone.

 

 

Red Rover, Read over please send Moria over.

 

 

She ignored it thinking it was just the cheesy music coming out of the speakers.  Her phone buzzed and when she answered it she had a hundred messages.

 

 

>WE KNOW THE TRUTH!<

 

 

>WE KNOW WHO YOU  R- E -A L- L- Y  ARE<

 

 

>UGLY<

 

 

>UGLY<

 

 

>UGLY<

 

 

>WHORE<

 

 

> FAKE BITCH!!<

 

 

“Moria!” Jenn  yelled.

 

 

“What?!”

 

 

“How does this shirt look?”

 

 

Shaking her head  â€śLooks great”

 

 

“Are you sure?”  Jen looked down at herself she thought I looked too slutty.

 

 

“Yes every boy at school will be asking you out.”  She smiled.  And thought  â€śyeah right”

 

 

Later while Moria was driving home she was listening to her favorite GLEE soundtrack singing along when though the radio she heard.

 

 

Red Rover,  Red Rover

 

 

At first she wasn’t sure she heard us.  So we started to say it louder

 

 

RED ROVER, RED ROVER

 

 

Moria started to  freak out trying to turn off the radio

 

 

READ ROVER, RED ROVER 

 

 

She missed the first time and she turned it off and there was silence and she sighed breathing in and out.  She  said to herself  â€śI’m almost home”  When she made the last turn at the last light  that turns into the road to her home.

 

 

RED ROVER, RED ROVER

 

 

Moria scream

 

 

RED ROVER, RED ROVER

 

 

Moria  repeated “Please stop! Please!”

 

 

RED ROVER, RED ROVER PLEASE SEND MORIA OVER!

 

 

Moria let out a deafening cream when head lights blinded her view and crashed as her car slid underneath the truck killing her instantly.

 

 

MORIA OVER!

 

This is a Draft





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[One sky, one destiny|0 likes] [|reply]

I liked it! It was good.

Ryc: Thanks! I hope I do good and can get my GED! ^_^

[*Duckie*|0 likes] [|reply]

Ryc: *smiles* no prob! An it was a bit fast paced but it seemed right for it being a bit fast.

[*Duckie*|0 likes] [|reply]

Lovely attempt! I found it eerie, especially with the repeated words like that. Make the tension build. Good work!

-Andi.

[[Cannibal_Carrots]|0 likes] [|reply]

Barly no life either?

[Simply Rachel|0 likes] [|reply]

I love it I missed reading your writing!!

[d.i.n.o.s.a.u.r.Star|0 likes] [|reply]

LOL, yeah dont do it if you dont like paying people back XD.

[Simply Rachel|0 likes] [|reply]

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