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Beyond Belief
by A RedSox Fan

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332. I want to get drunk tonight *poem

04/18/2015

332. I want to get drunk
04-18-2015
By Jonathan

I want to get drunk tonight
So you can tell me everything will be alright
I want to get drunk tonight
So I can open my heart and everything will be alright

I get so scared
Because of how much I care
I walk on eggshells
I try not to ring your bells

I want to get drunk tonight
Let all the words stumble out
I want to get drunk tonight
Let all the tears freely fall about

I love you
Do you know what that means?
I adore you, it’s true
I want you to be my one and only queen

I want to get drunk tonight
Take off all our clothes
I want to get drunk tonight
Touch my heart, touch my soul

My thoughts will remain bottled up inside
My true heart will still hide
I’m afraid of what you will think
As I run out of things to drink

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Last two lines are my favorite !!!!!

[twistedlady|0 likes] [|reply]

Awesome! You still haven't checked out allpoetry.com yet have you?

[Greta GarbageStar|0 likes] [|reply]

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RYC: Thanks, I really am so happy!

It is definitely unusual for a man to bring things for a woman's kids. Most men only care about the woman. It's wonderful that you did that even though she asked why you did. I was so surprised that my guy did that, and it was just so sweet!

Men just aren't as considerate and chivalrous anymore. It's really sad. Men should give flowers and spoil their girl, even if it's with small stuff. You don't need to go broke to show a woman how much you care about her!

[Belle Ivy RoseStar|0 likes] [|reply]

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RYC: Women who appreciate that kind of stuff are hard to find. Women have gotten used to horrible men so when they meet someone who does sweet stuff for them, they don't know what to do with it.

I hope you find someone who appreciates you and all you do!

[Belle Ivy RoseStar|0 likes] [|reply]

ryn: I did read Night. I forgot to add it to the list. There are more in the series I have yet to read.

[Greta GarbageStar|0 likes] [|reply]

Another good piece xx

[RWest|0 likes] [|reply]

April 20, 1912 - Fenway Park officially opens, Red Sox beat NY Highlanders 7-6 in 11

[TheHighlander|0 likes] [|reply]

RYC: Thank you for your comment. I appreciate the feedback.
Today I turned in a list of charities I was interested in and she pretty much said no to them all. These were ones that I was passionate about. She said she wanted something different. I'm not sure what her definition of different is but I guess with her being a speech teacher she has heard it all and is looking for something "different". I may just have to go with my original idea and she will get over it LOL. I just really need all the points I can get.

Thank you

[♥Exposed.|0 likes] [|reply]

good one; especially the last one.

[Ethan JamesStar|0 likes] [|reply]

Very nice! Last stanza was my favorite part!

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