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Beyond Belief
by A RedSox Fan

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03/23/2015

This poem is a bit different for me. This was written as two different poems, or at least the start of them. I wrote part 1-3-5 first, about a week ago and was going to post it but had other things I wanted to write. Then I wrote parts 2 and 4 and after looking at them, it clicked in my head that maybe it could go with that last poem. So I slide the parts in and...

328. The river starts at you
3-22-2015
By Jonathan


The game of love is so confusing, I can’t figure it out
Just when I thought I did, the rules were changed about
I’m sitting at my desk, trying to figure out how it all goes
I end up playing a game with X’s and O’s

My tears fall like rain during a hurracaine
Distructive, reckless, with mallace

On my desk sits a picture of you with a smile
A mix of both wet and dry stain tears, been there for a while
A flashback to that beautiful day
The day we walked along the bay

My tears flow like a river on a spring day
Calm, gentle, with ease

I just need to write
So everything is alright
Get it out of my system
Because you are someone else’s gem

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LOVE!!!!

[twistedlady|0 likes] [|reply]

aww, so sweet.

[Ethan JamesStar|0 likes] [|reply]

ryc: She's not in high school, she's the same age as me(33). She's very immature in many ways.

[Ethan JamesStar|0 likes] [|reply]

Thing is, he doesn't treat her like she is his gem, like you would. Beautiful poem by the way..*hug*

[Mrs. Evans|0 likes] [|reply]

I haven't been there in years. I don't recall what I ate there aside from a bread bowl soup with seafood inside from one of the piers and I don't think I ever went to a bar there.

[xo heatherStar|0 likes] [|reply]

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RYC: Don't feel bad! Things in life are both good and bad. I take the bad and try to learn from it while focusing on the good.

I agree, my daughter is most important and long term I want a guy who wants to be around us both. Hopefully I find that at some point!

[Belle Ivy RoseStar|0 likes] [|reply]

very sweet! I am telling you should write your poetry at allpoetry.com!

[Greta GarbageStar|0 likes] [|reply]

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