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Beyond Belief
by A RedSox Fan

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Indiana teaser...a poem

11/06/2012

Was it all...just a dream?
11-06-12
Jonathan

I was dead tired and went to sleep about 9:30PM
I woke at 1;30ish in my own bed.
Alone
Cold
Far away from you.

From your giddy laugh
Angelic voice
Warm and loving hugs
Your soft hair
Soft skin
Big grin
Big heart
Was it all...just a dream?

The way Moagie ran towards me
Jumped on my lap, whenever I was around
Her soft hair
Gentle nibbles
Tickling licks
Her tugs at the rope
Her pouncing me with a ball she just retrieved
Was it all...just a dream?

Your guiding hands, feeding the ducks
Laughing together at the comity show
Exchanging gifts
Giving you back-shoulder massages, ow', mmm
Writing love messages in Braille
Getting Dustin Pedroia's peg...shh no one else has to know the truth
Mmm, Homemade Matzo ball veggie soup
Sunday brunch, Sunday Brunch
He's this tall, this wide, and has a black line going down like that
It's...Simba and Narla
"I say RedSox, Sex and breathing"
"If you love me enough to sell them, I love you enough not to let you"
Emotional conversation
With enough tears to make the Nile jealous
It's like a big fish bowl and all the fishes are my thoughts
"and when you can see your unborn children, in her arms, you know you really love, a woman"
This feels like a dream and I don't want to wake from this dream
Was it all...just a dream?

Your side wades hugs with your head on my chest
The way our fingers just interlocked so perfectly
With a gentle squeeze
Your pokes to my arms
Or wherever they landed
Your physical contact
Your shoulder pressed against mine
Your head on my shoulder
My head on yours
Was it all...just a dream?

Your small frame
Soft skin
Gentle kisses
The way your skin smelled, tasted
Was it all...just a dream?

If it was a dream
I can't wait to dream again
I love you Karen

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this is probably your very best piece.

[~Kimberly~|0 likes] [|reply]

Eeeeep. Amazing. I'm excited to read the detailed entry!!!!!!!

[»Mrs. Evans«|0 likes] [|reply]

Nice! Stop teasing and tell us what really happened....I'm not good at deciphering poetry. lol

[~Just the 2 of Us~Star|0 likes] [|reply]

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[ClickClackMooStar|0 likes] [|reply]

Wow, that was absolutely beautiful!

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