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Beyond Belief
by A RedSox Fan

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unfinished story and "what are you looking at" poem

10/28/2014

I am cleaning up my computer a bit as I prepare for a new computer which I'm hoping to get next week if not, defanately the following week.
I was going through the documents in my "my doc" folder. There is a doc called "book 1" which I don't know the last time I opened the document.

I opened the document and started reading the story. I remember the story but it was as if I was reading it for the first time because I don't know what is next. I was ccurious and checked on when the document was written and the last time I wrote in it... created 2008 last updated 2010. wow, it's been a while.
I was reading and reading it and I just kept going... PG 8 PG9 PG 10.. how long is the story so far... WOW! 41 pages and it's not even finished.
The story is about a blind psychology professor. It is written in detailed description.
I'm still reading through it. I had to change the name of the female character...
Once I fix it up, even uncomplete I'll prob let you read it. Not sure if I will post here or just have people send me an email to send it out to.

Today at work, I was sitting there with nothing to do...

315. what are you looking at
10 28 2014
By Jonathan

A man is staring at me from across the table
I wonder what he’s thinking, I wonder if he’s stable
He’s wearing a shirt and a tie
He has a stern look, he has dagger eyes

He has a mug of beer
Taking notes of me, he had a pad of paper there
He works for the FBI
I can feel it, I can’t lie

I’m scared, I don’t know what to do
I’m not sure what he’s going to do, I have no clue
He’s sending chills up my back
He’s trying to kill me, he’s going to give me a heart attack

I need to get out of here, I need a plan
I wonder if he has a look out, someone sitting in a van
I wonder if there’s a back door
I wonder if he has spies on the floor

I need a disguise
I need to get out of here alive
Everyone is staring at me
They’re out to get me

I need to run
I don’t have a gun
This isn’t fun
I am done

previous entry: a soldier’s serenade *poem

next entry: 666 game 7 2014 WS GIANTS WON and Owen's bris

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I better be on the email list for that story! and once again, awesome poem. I think the previous one is one of my faves though

[»Mrs. Evans«|0 likes] [|reply]

Very cool! Sounds interesting!

[~Just the 3 of Us~Star|0 likes] [|reply]

Finish it and try to get it published

[Simply*Carlise|0 likes] [|reply]

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